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Looking In Your Eyes

Looking in your eyes
I lose myself
I can see nothing else but you
I get lost in a train of thought
About you
You're eyes lose me
When you're close
My heart pounds
When our eyes lock
I can't seem to tear them away
I lose myself
Looking in your eyes

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  • Sle3p
    October 22, 2008
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    yay

    Yayyy! maddie lubs it. <3 keep up the good work!


  • biggdoggspaz5000
    October 21, 2008

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    I Like It

    Short sweet to the ponit i like this one alot i have nothing to complain about this awsome peace stay sic stay true peace out

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    October 21, 2008

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    this was a very good poem kwalk. i enjoyed it. the sense of love you bring forth makes me get a warm feeling inside. keep it up! i also loved the imagery in your words.