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What is under what

Cloaked well
in granular sand
of personal hypothesis
falling against veracity,
sheen wanes into oblivion.

Smugly devouring,
prism light,
a low watt glow remains
still,
blinking for life.

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Prompt- dirt for diamonds

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    October 25, 2008

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    A well-expressed positive poem.
    Good luck in the contest.




  • tawk gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    Wow what a very thought provoking abstract! I love the background too. Good luck in the contest my friend. hugs Theresa

  • mcheadle
    October 22, 2008
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    A good take ...mac

  • mcheadle
    October 22, 2008
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    A good take ...mac


  • The Cube
    October 22, 2008

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    Very well done and a completely different perspective of the prompt. I liked this one very much. Short, but it has just enough poetic and metephoric kick to make up for it.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Ahh yes, hard to smother a bright glow within! Fab take on that prompt sis


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Excellent best in the contest

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