I love you, can't you see?
That feeling I get when you're with me,
The reason I can't sleep at night,
It's just simple love at first sight,
It's why I'm nervous when I'm with you,
The way I watch the things you do,
The feeling I get I get when I see your face,
The way you look that makes my heart race,
When you look me straight in the eye,
I can’t help but feel shy,
Every time you hold my hand,
My legs feel weak and it’s hard to stand,
After all of this I have to say,
Have a happy Valentine’s Day!
A contest entry
- Secret Love by piccola.
650 points, ended October 22, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lovvvvve by fake-or-real-smile.
550 points, ended November 3, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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Option you chose is needed in A/N, msg me when it's done with the name of your poem and I'll comment again. It DOES state this in the rules.
Rebecca
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This is the real thing. It embodies that nervousness ... looking down, afraid to meet eyes ... afraid someone can feel that warmth inside you. Nice job and thank you for entering.
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It was cheesy!
Anyone, please give me tips on this, it didn't turn out as good as I wanted it to..
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