Without trying you upset me,
You tear apart my soul.
Just by smiling, you uplift me,
You make my heart feel whole.
Without intending to, you confuse me,
You tear apart my mind.
Your convuluted answers,
Bring more questions I can't find.
10-10-2008
Author notes
hmm . . .
I wrote this October 10, 2008, a time when I was feeling really really wierd . . . I think the poem honestly says it better than I ever could in a commentary, honestly.
But suffice to say, my heart and mind clash on a day to day basis.
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Amazing!!
Thank you for thispiece. I am feeling very much like this right now, and I read this at agood time. Thank you for this. It kinda helps to know that there is someone out there feeling ike I am, for some odd reason. Thanks and best of luck! -
good
it has a sense of mystery to it...
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Thanks, the sense of mystery is exactly what I was aiming for. ^_^
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