We danced
from eight until one
and we drank
and we kissed
we thought we were sixteen again
and invincible
the music got slower
and we drew closer
until
we had to call a cab
Coffee?
she said
outside her door
but I did not answer
just helped her with her key
while she took off her shoes
in the kitchen
she turned on her heel
turned on the kettle
then
turned on me
and we kissed again
deep and long
until she broke away
and said
"Fuck me!"
A contest entry
- Fuck me by sheltered.
700 points, ended October 23, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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fuck the coffee
and me
but try to stay awake will ya
nice. thanks
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a perfectly designed scene - are you sure you haven't directed a movie or two?
L xxoo
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I could be tempted to direct this one, are you available to play the female lead?
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Mmmmm......
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