Subtle skin worshiped, graced by luscious limb,
snippets of her figure, sculpt the perfect sin
Hearts are born to beat, outside a church of hymns,
Glowing in the heat of night, you're my oxygen.
She cleanses me with soft ivory,
as I bow before her on bended knee
Can I ever heal you like you've healed me...
or is a shattered soul the sea?
Thoughts I ponder in-between,
for you're more than just a lover's queen
Crowned with rose thorns since thirteen
seems true love's a dreamer's theme.
So many places my words flow when the wind blows,
Lips to kiss upon, laying in your angel's glow
wandering down a dead end road of life's woes,
I breathe the breath of loneliness you show.
I'd bear your burdens along with my own,
Let us be as one, two heartbeats, one home.
Author notes
Credit: Passionofagoddess
A contest entry
- Crucify Your Emotions Picture Prompt by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
730 points, ended November 1, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Need Some Love
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Tim this is so beautiful, you took my breath away.
i love it...you are my poet.
my only and one wonderful poetic soul
love ya
Elena
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wow
no other words needed
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congrats to you on the gold...beautiful imagery..blessings always ~Trisha~
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Exquisite!
A most adoring piece filled with all
the morsels of passions embrace.
You've weaved a masterpiece with
your eloquent expression of emotion.
Congratulations on a job well done.
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Such a beautiful piece ... The tenderness you pen always leave me in awe, no matter the subject - you are a weaver of beauty my dear!!! And yes, those last two lines are gorgeous!!!
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OMG WHAT A PHOTO. I USED TO DREAM OF BEING ON A CROSS, HEAD HANGED DOWN DYING.
were my emotions being killed?
Your great poeticweaver.
smile,
Judy
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"I'd bear your burdens along with my own,
Let us be as one, two heartbeats, one home."
Very powerful statement. Nice job -
this is exquisite writing
and deserves to win
it really touched me
applause
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wow...
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Two hearts one home
nicely put.
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Incredible
I am quite amazed at the depth and flow of this write from you. I really like the overall gracefulness you put forth into your writes and this poem is another mighty fine example. I really like the way this was written. any ays just a brilliant poem that screams to be a winner. excellent work here and good luck in the contest
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the write it so full of grace and love
i truly like your last two sentences
it is gold in my heart and i wish you
the very best in the contest
much love your sis brenda -
Beautiful imagery my dear brother.
I see your pen is busy once again...
Many blessings
~A~
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great write dad, the poem was full of so much i loved it much i wish you nothing but the best in the contest love always..xoxox
vanna -
yes Mushy yes! i so love this hon you ran with your emotions and got intouch with the most sensitivity of some men you captured what they may couldn't you are KING I LOVE IT!
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