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Princess Lauretta

Princess Lauretta
Special as the day
Warm sunny sunshine
That chases away the grey.

Clouds cannot reach here, there is no sorrow.
Happy days that shine at night
Stars twinkle in your eyes
Eyes that shine so bright
Like blue dawn flowers
You are rarer than the rarest flower
More precious than the most expensive jewel.

Feelings I cannot contain
There are no conditions when I look into your eyes
There is just complete trust.
It is you that keeps me sane.

Looking into your eyes I see my whole life and finally it means something to me.
I have everything that I need
I am complete,
I feel selfless, no need for greed.

I carry a part of you inside my soul
I see you in my face,
I look at you in the mirror,
I feel proud, I feel grace.

You are my pot of gold at the end of the rainbow,
You take my breath away like the sunset of a glorious summer day.
If I could gather all the beautiful wonders of the world it wouldn't be enough.

I see you in my poetry,
I see you in the prettiest painting
Yet words and pictures are not enough to say thank – you
My precious Princess Lauretta
Angelic cherub
That makes my heart glow and chases away the grey.

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  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    a wonderful tribute to Lauretta! she should be flattered !! best of luck in the contest! you did a beautiful job!


  • Nidaeah
    October 27, 2008
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    Very Beautiful.

    Thank you for this beautiful piece. Very lovely! Best of luck!


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    October 22, 2008

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    Awww this is so sweet I'm sure when Lauretta can read it herself she will be deeply touched as I was simply reading it, great work as always x


  • Samplette gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    A wonderful tribute to your love of Lauretta...a precious gift you need to save for her until she can read it. Beautiful work. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam