Whatever, i'm sick of
you crying to me,
and forever I will
ignore your plea.
You let me down and
now you say sorry
but I say whatever
cause I don't care,
but when I look at
you the sadness I
can't bare.
Once you were nice
and we were friends,
but seriously get
over it 'cause
everything ends.
Now I see you walking
away, crimson hearts of
love now stone grey!
Your laughter and your
sorrow fills my ears,
and when I think of
your puzzled hazel eyes
I hold back tears...
Author notes
(picture) courtesy of www.art.com ladybug lands on Lee
A contest entry
- I'm gunna give you points for your poems! by SmartBrick.
400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 67 entries
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Very nice!Your score:
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Very sad, but it sounds like you do still care. Sometimes we have to protect ourselves from users. Good imagery!
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I LOVE IT!!! it's so sad.
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Wow,ASpice.....This was DEEPPPPP!!!!This was dif. then wht you normally write,but i LIKED it!I liked the WHOLE thing,and is this true from the heart?Or is it something you just came up with and wrote down?I loved the pic btw!
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