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Intertwining Potential

It all begins with a stare
A simple action
An interlocking of vision
Eyes wander through a sea of mundane
They rest upon a farmiliar stranger
Their eyes look back
They look into each other
Absorb each other
Exchanging unknown information
Broken through cowardice and shame
Lasting only moments
It was all that was recieved
It was all that was needed

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