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Resounding peace

Something calls for sweet release
Echoing deeply, resounding peace
Chill the winds of change have blown
Scattering all we've thought and known

Where we now go 
What lies ahead
What words unspoken
What thoughts unsaid

Ticking still
The sands of time
Our lives may feel
As though they unwind

Seek the good
Seek for peace
Hold friends tight
Sweet realease

The ever present, resounding peace

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  • Livingstorm
    October 21, 2008
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