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Beauty Denied

The filth of hurt lie

within these hands;

cannot see the beauty so denied

from diamonds in the rut onto lands.

Sadness...

Controlled in these smut to be revert

these egoes we hold dearly,

for apart of us our covered in dirt,

needing to be cleansed clearly.

Pain....

The sparkle that shine in us

cannot sustain the light, so deep

below we stay hidden obsessing,

 things we cannot obtain

 through enternal sleep.

Egoes...

 

 

 

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quote "..Dirt for Diamonds.."

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  • The Cube gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Very well done. A really good example as to what I am looking for. Thank you for entering.
    • haley27 gold member
      October 22, 2008
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      That s cool

      I'm glad you liked the poem. Thank you for commenting. Haley27