From 'Foreword' to 'End'

Reciprocated sentiments
Unfolded emotions
- End of the prologue

Flights of fancy,
Castles built in the air
- Prologue of the story
Reciprocated sentiments
Unfolded emotions
-end of the foreword

The epithalamic note is –
Numerous Acts to come
Perform without rehearsals
Give a happy END to the story

A contest entry

PIF Semi-Quickie... by kiwigirljacks. 900 points, ended October 29, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Cerulean Sunrise
October 29, 2008
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I like this poem.
KayJay
October 25, 2008

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Very nice... an enjoyable read. I like the positive ending of your poem... the feeling that our choices govern our future... well done and best of luck.
Ken
kiwigirljacks
October 24, 2008

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I actually found the pauses in this to give the narrative feel quite poignant... made me really see life and love as a story that has many parts to it, but always hoping for a happy ending. Great take!
Rhythm Child
October 21, 2008
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i found this very choppy when reading however it is a brillaint poem content wise
- Kiddy
  October 21, 2008
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  I appreciate your valuable comment, RC... I guess Pauses used here didnt work for you in a way... I just wanted them to give wings to imagination and explain more about feeling of Love and life...
  
  Thanks for reading, RC...