The ragged edges of collapsing clouds,
instigates tight lipped frowns
in memory of you;
I would heckle the thought,
but it would be a folly,
falling into incessant bitchdom,
as you always did
and I non longer care.
Ah!
At last!
An evolution!
Hoorah for Darwin!
Gods just tumbled to the ground
with the rest of the rain;
a new acid defiling waters,
leaving lands barren,
for extreme environmentalists
to cry along to your sob story.
Don’t worry,
it’s just an emotion.
It wont last, you’ll get over it,
to return to your heights
of aggravating ferocity,
just like a steeplejack
who climbed the heights
and forgot to return to the ground,
shouting....
“Fuck the ground and
fuck you all!”,
to a world he thought he ruled,
until the demolition team
destroyed the building
and the whole world laughed,
straddling his broken body.
Now, there was a lesson,
but you shouldn’t really listen,
as you will just follow
in footsteps of mutations mistakes.
Author notes
Again, it's another "Don't ask!" 
A contest entry
- Fuck me by sheltered.
700 points, ended October 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - New! Truly Original Poetry Wanted :) by Oleander.
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Comments
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beautiful imagery, well penned
xd
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oooh this is cool!

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somebody give that man the Crown of Cynicism! LOL killer write hoss, killer.


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Thank you, hope goes a long way....but only cynicism pays the bills.
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now this is some of the
"out of the box"
that I hoped to see
a dead-end destiny
to fuck me slowly

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Thank you most kindly.
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