Oh tell me of your secrets then.
Just whisper in my ear.
Have you got something to say.
Because this feels a little queer.
Come on I haven’t got all day.
I have things that I must do!
I plan on taking a swim later.
what! yes you can come too.
And What then! well I plan to eat
Whats that, Oh yes. you can eat as well.
I wish you would hurry up.
Was there something you wanted to tell?
Mummy’s doing what? With Uncle Ben! Well few!
that’s one less thing today that I have to do.
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A contest entry
- Humour in Nature - Contest One by AnnD.
1000 points, ended November 3, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lol
This is funny
, I love this
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You are really marvellous almost like the summer breeze that kisses away the tears of the heat in the evening and makes me smile in delight.ReallyI cannot help but laugh this is hillarious infidelity among bears, what next?Thanks for sharing take care...
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Naughty Bears!
This is so adorable. How did you make that bear's mouth move? 
What??? Yet another Silver that should be Gold! 
It's Gold to me. 
So bears are not monogamous? Didn't know that. Funny line to end. 
One less thing to do! Ha! 
I had an uncle Ben & he wasn't into that.
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Wow.. this is a freaking amazing write. I love the story told. It had me laughing more and more the farther into the piece I got.
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again here you have me laughing with that sense of humor of yours!
well done again my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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Congratulations on your Silver award I knew when i first read it that this was a winner Excellent
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Excellent
What a great take on the picture. So very well done. Congratulations on the silver.
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oooooh Paul, I knew you would come up with a brilliant entry. Your sense of humour is priceless.. thankyou so much for entering here and for bringing this one so much to life.
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This is just exceptional. Even without the video it is a grand piece of poetry. But that video is just too darn funny. Awesome
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OMG~ Now this is cute and funny I love the video. Most excellent woot!
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LOL this was so funny! I think that it's outstanding and the youtube just makes it even better!!
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Trust you to add innuendo Well done!
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This is such a wonderfuly created take on the adorable picyure. I love the scene your words painted. Good luck...
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Weeeeeeeeeeee my friend this one sure brought a smile to the face with the last two lines You set it up wonderfully well, never saw it coming Excellent
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OH
LMAO This is too funny and you are way bad!
All the best with this
Gaylene
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HAHAHAHAH!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!
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