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Love

My beating heart
My eager eyes
My racing mind
Look at me
Can't you see?
I need you here by my side
Where have you gone?
Memories
Too many
Overflowing
Emotions
Swelling inside my body
Burning up
Taking over my mind
Can't you see?
There's a missing part in my life
But when you are here
I feel complete
Whole
Come back and lay here in my arms
Let me hear your soothing voice
Whisper in my ear
I need to see your smiling face
I need to feel your eyes
Finding their way
Into mine
Feel your skin against mine
Can't you see?
This is it
This is
L.O.V.E

Author notes

well... haha, i was writing this for my best friend who happened to forget to do her homework {love you rumshieeee =P ♥} but when she read it she was lyk: NO WAY, this is amazing im lyk.. haha, thaaaanx... shez lyk omg you should use it, seriously, but then i got her into taking it { she was hopeless with out it JUST KIDDING JUST KIDDING JUST KIDDIN MUAH!!! } haahaha... yeah.... so i hope you lyk it... =DDD

Hey! So umm... what do you think?!?! =P

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Comments


  • painfully amazing
    November 13, 2008
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    haha you did this for rumsha? haha i love her

    this is really good =]


    • Manoura xx
      January 30
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      haha,, yea!!! last minute in la. shes lyk: oh shit i forgot my hw!! =P

  • yeckerah
    October 24, 2008
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    good job

    keep it up!