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Hand In This

Spiraling suspension
Gargling asphyxiation
Synchronizing
With splattered, spreading
Drool and blood

As the noose itches

In each revolution
I see my culprit in glimpses
Having been pushed
To breakage
As the last sensations of hate
Fade

Withering nerves twitches

I could rationalize
All my failings
Till they convicted you
And arrest you
With guilt of my demise
Letting you suffer the pain

Of my internal stitches

There are
But two of us
And I would blame this
All on you
But I have no foot to stand on
Alas my spine is broken
I want to say
You pushed me over the edge
But the irony stings

As I realize you have no hands

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A bit of a convoluted write, have fun with it.

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  • in the snow
    October 22, 2008
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    scared

    I was frightened as i read this. Truly. The smily face beneath this text is a paradox .