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One Last Kiss

If the result of a kiss
Is as much as this
I’d rather not even
Live to see it.

If the result of us
Is horribly tough
To get through
I’m sorry to you

But if to be
With whom I like
I hurt a friend
I’d rather die.

I cannot think
Of something more selfish
Than how I have
been horribly acting.

-Tears invade my face and I cry my heart to you
-A kiss is left; my worse regret is not being able to
-Give me my glass, one last guess, one last kiss
-Dear beautiful gem of transparency
-My scarlet drink I give to thee…

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I have nothing much to explain here, except that it's dedicated to Kiyo and Zeke. v_v

I'm... very sorry...

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  • TheDeadMan
    October 27, 2008
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    awesome write. the emotion behind it is amazing.


  • SilentInsanity
    October 26, 2008
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    The thought of friends before lovers is very honorable!


  • Erica Carnea
    October 26, 2008
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    great flow and i love this!!
    lve always
    erica
    please return the favour...0x


  • UnravledLove
    October 25, 2008

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    Great write! I like how you flow in your stanzas I like the pattern of the poem and I totally agree with your third stanza nice job.


  • xXStrugglingKiddXx
    October 24, 2008
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    WOW

    This is really good!


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    October 24, 2008

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    This gave me goosbumps as I read how true your heart is!

    You are worth GOLD!!

    Take care
    Becks

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