To my dear friend
I cant say I know very well
But remember all the few times we spent together?
those memoirs shall be in my heart forvever
Your smiles had ascended me onto a pedestal
that blossomed inside me-like rose petals
Seeing you bidding many a goodbye's
brings undemanding tears to my eyes
So I guess i'll see you some other time
this poem shall always keep me alive
you keep well and your joy abright
because everyday begins with your smile's light !
Author notes
For you dear friend!
A contest entry
- Goodbye and Goodluck by Georgia La Mariposa.
400 points, ended October 22, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Goodbye My Friend by Peachy.
550 points, ended December 13, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do u think of my poem ?
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Beautiful!
A very uplifting poem that just makes you smile. The heart-warming side of friendship is displayed here.
Thank you for entering and good luck! -
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thank u poet!
good luck judging!
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i can totally relate being a 16 year old girl myself. I really feel what your going through. Nice write!
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thunkkkk ooo!!!
hahahahaha...
:}
i r eli appreciate it!!!
love,
Anagha-Nataraj
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2nd para is superb
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i read anything that is written for a friend more than once, and yours tells me that friendship to you is of much importance in your life as you have written, made time to write this. I value friendship as the ultimate relationship as it is something that is so basic to one's life. without which life is difficult and boring. this was wonderful to reading this morning. thanks for sharing.
Love and light,
lencio
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"Your smiles had ascended me onto a pedestal
that blossomed inside me-like rose petals
Seeing you bidding many a goodbye's
brings undemanding tears to my eyes"
Wow, that made me smile which is good because I haven't all day ^^
This is really a very beautiful piece
I'm glad she liked it
Claire x -
Awww this is beautiful I have tears in my eyes!! Who may I ask is the creator or this wonderful piece? Thanks so much xx
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i waned u to feel what i did.....and i wrote this poem for u ......i may not know u but...in my heart...everyone is my friend!
muah!
Anagha-Nataraj
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