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Peace Spell

A little salvation
A cup of caring and love
A little  of forgiveness
A cup of Honesty and faithfulness
A cup of pure water
A cup of the tears of the people
A cup of the natural soil
A cup of His pure Blood
A dash of His Body
Put it in a Holy bowl
Mix it up till it stable
Spend it throughout the world
What spell do we get?
Do we get Peace?

Author notes

I dont believe in magic, but I did the best I could lol.

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  • Darkwell
    October 26, 2008
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    what a lovely idea that we might weave peace with a wand and such an intricate and well thought out potion to accompany this petrificus hostilitus spell. this student wins a rememberall so they may never forget the wish for peace and 10 points to hufflepuff.