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Unfinished

Rip off the skin
It is only me.
Cover your eyes
I will help you see.

Little child
Beginning your life.
Please hold on tight
Ahead is more strife.

Try all you might
There is no hope now.
Only time tells
All our fates somehow.

You think it will
All be okay here.
But in all truth
You’re doomed to your fear.

I want to help
And make you see this.
But how can I?
Feelings to dismiss.

I wonder now
Is life here worth it?
With all this pain
In which I now sit.

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  • Kurai Namida
    October 21, 2008
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    i looooove the first stanza. that is amazing Kit.
    this is an amazing poem, and i love it.