And he said
"tempt me".
so I let the beads
dance
upon his skin.
I kissed him with a fervor,
passionate, as the
snowflakes
tiptoed around our eyes
and the sun melted skin
against skin.
and love flowed
upon pure white
daisies.
A contest entry
- Sensual Pic. Prompt (Adult) by nevadapoet.
500 points, ended October 23, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
rather waste some time with you.
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This is really quite beautiful. I love the simplicity of it and the way it gave me goosebumps :]
"so I let the beads
dance
upon his skin."
Very sensual. I like it. :] Reminds me of me and my boyfriend when we kiss ^_^
"tiptoed around our eyes
and the sun melted skin
against skin.
and love flowed
upon pure white
daisies."
That right there is what gave me goosebumps. Absolutely elegant. :] Beautiful description. I love the separation of "melted skin/against skin." Really brilliant. Definitely deserving of your trophy. :] I also really love the background and your title, how it plays with that expression. :]
Peace
-Lily♥
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wow...perfect write... I love it. Great imagery. Thanks for the entry.
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Thank you so much! My first silver! This was a good prompt.
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*jaw drops*
wowsa...
just. wow.
lana. I LOVE YOU!
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I second this.
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indeedily.
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I think it's beautiful...
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this is sweet, it paints great pictures in my mind.
and it gives me that warm feeling we all wish to keep.
nice..
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