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He's stuck in my mind

I've been thinking about him none-stop,
For how long, i can't remember,
All i can say,
Is that it feels like forever.

His blue eyes peirce my mind,
His whisper remains in my ear,
When he puts his arms around my waist,
I just know he's staying here.

When i'm not around him,
I can still feel his breath on my skin.
I can just imagine a future,
And all the happiness he could bring.

I would give up everything,
Just to keep him by my side.
I would hold on forever,
And leave my past behind.


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  • Nidaeah
    October 26, 2008

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    Most Excellent!

    Thank you for this piece. Almost mad me cry due to certain situations with my love at the moment. Best of luck to you!!