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Just a simple prayer

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As we pray for Edna's health to return
let us also say a prayer for Hugh as well.
That he may have the strength to cope
until Edna has the operation on her foot.
A loving Husband and carer with a heart
of gold, who will do anything to ease her pain
without any thought for himself.
So Hugh I salute you for the gentle man you are;
I pray with all my heart that life gets better soon
for both you and Edna so you may rest once more.

So know that Heath and I are here for both of you.

Love Hine

Oct 21st 2008

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Heath and I visited Hugh and Edna and it's wonderful to watch the way he cares for her
with all the love he can give and if he could he would take away her pain.
So hat's off to Hugh for being the kind caring man he is.
Love Hine and Heath.

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  • angelica silver member
    October 25, 2008

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    Congratulations Hine on your GREEN trophy, I'm pleased you wrote one for Hugh, a carers job is not an easy one.
    Love Joan


  • Blankscreen2222
    October 23, 2008
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    So very lovely!


    Georgina.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 23, 2008
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    Ah, thoughtful words
    that will warm the Kingly heart!

    M-C


  • lordoftherings gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    One day we will all be putting this behind us in a memory and taost Hugh for all in strength.

    Gregg


  • Yemassee gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Ah, I think this may be the only poem that focuses mainly on Hugh, and that was nice of you to remember him in this tribute. I will share your best wishes. He's one of the few who doesn't mind my poor humor, a rare gem indeed.


  • Maureen silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    Dear Hinemoa,

    Hat's off to you for writing this thoughtful poem!

    Best Wishes,
    <3 Maureen


  • gaze
    October 22, 2008
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    Wonderful thought


  • MargaretG
    October 21, 2008
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    Amen

    Beautifully done Hine, and it needed to be said.


    • Hinemoa silver member
      October 22, 2008
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      Thanks Margaret, it's not perfect but I only had a limited time to write it and as you said "It needed to be said" As the carer suffers as much as the patient does.
      Love Hine:h


  • hugh wyles silver member
    October 21, 2008

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    Dear Hine,

    AAWWWW! Thankyou - what else can I say, except that's what husbands are for?
    "For richer, for poorer, for better or worse...."
    Applause and thanks, love and hugs, XXX Hugh.


    • Hinemoa silver member
      October 22, 2008
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      Dear Babe, I'm glad you didn't rouse on me for posting it as I feel you do a wonderful job caring for our Queen and you deserve some praise and a prayer for you.
      Love Hine

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