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the goldfish






the goldfish
sinks in his pond
sunset





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  • Lencio Rodrigues
    October 23, 2008

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    Nice! that reminds me I havent written a Haiku in a long while! But im inspired by this and should have a few soon!

    Lencio


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 22, 2008
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    Lmao

    Oh how bitterly sweet this little write is. I really liked the stunning visual effect your words has upon an imagination as big as mine. Oh I could see that goldfish enjoying anothe rlazy ass day and blamo goes down to find his sleeping spot as sunset has come. any ways brilliwnt Haiku here and keep it up =)