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Dwindling day monarch
beneath spawning azure horizon,

sand granules
in amarantine moment
inside glass hour,
hearts anguish
cushioned with sleeping Nova.





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Prompt
sunset
surreal

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  • etoile
    October 27, 2008

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    I love the imagery you used in this piece, it's breathtaking and amazing. the second stanza is my favourite. this is very well written. great take on both of the prompts.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 22, 2008
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    What a stunning write this is! Love it!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    As always I think you did a lovely job on this thank you very much for sharing and good luck in the contest best wishes always be well

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