Did you love your brother?
Did you love your brother?
Did you love your brother?
Well his head is breaking
He's unsure what he's taking
His sister is the only one he adores
The only one who knows there's something more
Beyond the scars...
Beyond the cutting and the blood red stars...
I know mom is still there in the air
I can hear her; do you still hear her?
I hear her in my head
Is she alive like you or is she dead?
I'd like to be your brother honey
A contest entry
- I Am So Lonely... I Need A Family by Angels Whispers.
900 points, ended November 5, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Brother you shall be!
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Hello Sweet one, I hope this message greets you with a happy heart.
Hon, your words touched deeply, and as I read them I saw your face, so caring and so loving.
You have the heart of an angel and I wish much happiness for you, for you have been a real friend to me and I am so honoured to call you 'my friend'.
If I could reach through this monitor,I would tenderly hug you and give back to you, what you have given to me, and that is love and caring of another human being.
Sweet heart your poem was written extremely well,
and I have so much love to give, and would dearly love to share this with you.
So with arms opened wide, it would make my heart so very happy for you to join my family.
I'm glad to have you as my 'Brother'.
Welcome Bro!
With deep appreciation I thank you for wanting to become a member of my family, and also for noticing my contest and taking the time to enter it.
I send to you much love and happiness and look forward to getting to know you more deeply than what I already do!
Take care sweetheart and much love to you.
Your loving sis in poetry,
~Angel-Anne~ (aka Anne)
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