On a quest, sailing all alone,
Nautical miles, beyond measure,
Swept in a flash, without pleasure.
I'm the Prince, one without a throne.
Beyond seas seven, in valleys asleep,
Lands unclaimed, ravaged in war,
Await with hope, a Prince from far.
I'm the Light, lost in ravines deep.
Docking my ship, feet on gold sand,
Natives in sight, shed tears of bliss,
No moment so grand, my crown I kiss.
I'm the King, until she's on land.
Weak in my knees, I drop on sight,
Princess so pretty, I glow with pride,
She knows my name, with me she'll ride.
I'm the Shadow, in her beautiful light.
'Hair so pretty, unto your shoulders'
I sing, she smiles.
'Eyes so magical, deep into abyss'
I sing, she smiles.
'Form so divine, sculpted by Gods'
I sing, she smiles.
'Smile so sweet, I could die for'
I sing, she shoots.
'Bugger...' she sung, still smiling.
On a quest, sailing all alone,
Heavenly miles, beyond measure,
Swept in a flash, without pleasure.
I'm still the Prince, one without a throne.
Author notes
At this rate, if I keep writing for every pretty girl who wants me to, I'm gonna have more than I can handle 
Dear reader, before you get wrong ideas, I'm no player! It's just that I come across ladies in my life who leave me head over heels about them, without a specific reason as to why, I'm left with no choice but to pen down a couple of words and try understanding whats so magical about them.
I guess I succeeded to an extent with this one!
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awsome
very funny keep writing its funny and very very good good job lol your a playr -
tear... magnificent....round of applause
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Thanks a ton for your comment!
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i know where you are coming from. there is a girl i want i would die for. she has been so hurt. i know if im patient she will be mine.
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Good luck to you bro! Thanks for the comment!
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BRAVO!!! :)
If it wasn't for the title I would have thought that the princess was nice. HA! HA! Spectular format and wording. at least you didn't get stabbed in the heart that would have been bad. It's romantical in a sort of Twisted evil way but that makes it all the better.Any way you did wonderful.
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Whoa! Girl! You made my day! Thanks for the comment... Not been writing much lately.. and to pop in once a while and see somebody applaud my work is a damn good way to end my day, or rather start a new one
Thanks a ton again!
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I liked this. It was sweet and song-like. Good job.
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Hey! Thanks for the comment!
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oh n u r a player... u playa person u!!
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Who? Me? you overestimate me sista
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wow!
hahahahahah!!! dude this was awesome..!!! i absolutely loved it!! it starts off with such a surreal n mystical feel... the absolute awe u experience on beholdin us/her, (the superior species lol!!) was so perfectly penned!!! n the ending.. twisted, evil, true, sad n yet in a way very funny!!!! Great job!!! we women thank u oh male person for this wonderful write!!!
ps: love u loads!!
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Ah... I'm touched! Thank you thank you! Finally the superior species learn to appreciate the admirer instead of throwing a scorn
And yeah, I'm the hopeless admirer, hopeless is the exact words!
Oh and bloody detailed comment yours, inspite of the exams and all, so I understand you really must've enjoyed the poem! Glad I could entertain! Thanks for the comment again!
ps: love you loads more than you can love me loads
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Beeeeeeeeeautiful! It's so romantical!
Glad to see you are still alive, Dumbkiwaniwinkydodo, being gone for so long on your motorcycle!
Your Nutty Fairymother
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Thanks to my nutty fairymother for the lovely comment!
Yes yes I'm very much alive. And the elders werent wrong when they said guys with motorcycles had greater chances for a divorce!
Love ya lots!
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