As Winter's mantle melts away
and earth is now refreshed,
the dewdrops slide along each leaf
creation newly blessed.
The struggle of each new life begins
as colours stroke the land
and blossom strikes a dainty pose
in Mother Nature's hands.
Listen and you'll hear the cries
as the newborn take to flight,
there is no grander sight to see
than Spring's rainbowed delights.
Tentatively legs wobble
to firm foundations do they reach,
just like the mighty oak above
and the sweetest tasting peach.
A vast kaleidescope of views
renewed breath of nature's call,
my heart just always skips a beat
I can't help but be enthralled.
In a list
A contest entry
- Short Poems Of Nature by misticmoonlite.
475 points, ended October 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
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Excellent
Such a beautiful creation. So very well done as always. Best of luck in the contest.
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Just beautiful hun! I think you do nature writes better than anybody!!
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Wow
a beautiful piece here, flow is wonderful.
I had a smile on my face after reading this. Good luck.
Juls
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very pretty
the expressions of word useage is beautifully illustrated, thank you for this entry, good luck in my contest
Linda
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Poet
There is a book out there with your name on it. Grab it and be read by millions. Poets words and poets love.
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This is a wonderful little poem about nature. I love the imagery of new borns. Of flowers bright. And your rhyming does not feel at all forced. You flow with the poem is good and it is an interesting read. So to be honest I would say you have a wonderfully little written poem here. Good job and thanks for sharing this with us.
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You, my friend, are such a breath of fresh air
And we can't help but be enthralled by your beautiful words. Best of luck young lady.
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You know how to make me smile, with a beautiful nature poem and that rhyme you do oh so well. Gorgeous sweetheart. You make a person smile. Best to you in the contest
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Blissful imagery
'tentativley legs wobble'
bringing such a rich 'vast kaleidoscope of views'
literally a breath of fresh air Gaylene
Loved it as you enabledsneaked a peek through the eyes
Lib x x
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