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love ?

in moments of weakness
when my heart weeps
and my eyes bluer
i ask myself the question

when heartache tears me apart
my very soul consumed
and i gasp for breath
i ask myself the question

when all else fails
each moment drags me down
and i scream silently
i ask myself the question

when i am lost
blinded by past mistakes
and tremble on my knees in pain
i ask myself the question

am i strong enough ?
do i believe ?
is it real ?
is this love ?

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  • Shannon62875
    November 3, 2008
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    wow

    Great job!! i really enjoyed reading this write... You expressed yourself very well!!! I love the last 4 questions... So true!!! How can love cause you so much pain? It makes you really think if it is love... You did a great job!!! Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!

    Shannon*Leah