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Embrace ( HM )

Setting sun glistens a coppery glow,

warming sways at dusk.

Arch spines tingle,

waiting...

 

Shimmers of silk,

negligee bronzed,

clinging to curves of femininity.

 

Spanish rhythm,

Flamenco of desires,

romancing music of love.

 

Marble steps bare under foot,

feathered movements so lustful,

embracing touches,

surrendering...

 

his arrival.

 


 

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Option No 1

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Bird of Passage /Steps

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  • Beret55 silver member
    October 26, 2008
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    mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i liked that.
    Very warm and sensual.

  • in2it
    October 22, 2008

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    Your poetry is written to be read out loud. I love how you use strong sounds and forceful consonants yet convey such a gentle image.


  • Alyzeh
    October 22, 2008

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    Wow. Such vivid imagery. Beautifully written Julie. I don't know what to say to you, my vocabulary is too limited. There is nothing that hasnt already been said.

    Just simply love every piece by you


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    this is an absolutely beautiful poem that you've penned. Your words have created such profound imagery. that of which is very sensual and filled with love. You did an fantastic job with both the prompt & your poem

    good luck

    kat


  • maralisa silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    a beautiful poem julie your imagery is wonderful and your poem dances with sesual passion good luck in the contest my friend take care *hug maralisa


  • Topaze gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    A lovely sensual and seductive piece, nicely done. My best wishes in the contest.


  • daviscth silver member
    October 21, 2008

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    Sis, I'd love to write wonderful poems as easily as you seem to do. This is beautifully created.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    Another magnificent piece! Such sensuality flows from your pen! Just lovely! Bravo! This is truly a winner! Good luck in the contest.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    This is lovely

    I so love to read your poetry of love and how you bring such pleasures through your words


  • chilali
    October 21, 2008

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    Oh wow! Such beautiful vivid imagery! I cannot get over the beauty and the sensuality of this poem! The words are incredible! And I mean that completely!
    "Setting sun glistens a coppery glow"
    "Marble steps bare under foot"

    Incredible. I can picture all this in my mind and feel it as well! Beautifully written. Best to you in the contest

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