Today I sew back together
each piece of my heart
borrowed by people I loved
at different stages of my life
taking back
some sense of self
while I journey to make
me
whole
Author notes
30-40 words on the contest prompt
tapestry
A contest entry
- #7 Prompt by katzeyez.
700 points, ended November 3, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a gorgeous poem. its so sad, yet something about it gives the feeling of hope. maybe im totally confused, but what i got from it was a good feeling of love from those around you, who help at times. but maybe im just crazy
this is really well written.
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Wow hun!
I can relate to the emotions of this and sewing the heart back together ... very beautifully penned
Best of Luck!
♥
Stay safe
Love to You
~Manda
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This is excellent,
loved your take on the prompt,
it can really relate to this one,
JUST brilliant, brilliant
Good luck in the contest
Ken
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Godd for you! It's about time you took back the pieces of your heart...God knows it has been worn and stepped on long enough...won't you feel so much better when it is whole...
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this is beautiful and sad yet so full of hope...it is amazing, as you are and so wonderfully said...
it is Gold to my heart...
Love,
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This is just amazing! Such wonderful imnagery here.
Thank you and good luck.
Katz xx -
Oh what a beautiful piece and so fitting for the prompt! Very thought provoking indeed!
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Truly profound and deeply grasping. Best wishes to you in this contest sweet sister. Love and light, Gypsy-Princess... x
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Great write! Loved your take on the word prompt. Well done! Best to you in the contest
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A lovely write of reflection.
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