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I Found Heaven And An Angel There


Christian Glitter by www.christianglitter.com


I discovered Allpoetry and I felt I had finally found home
A place where I finally fit; was appreciated, and no longer alone
I wrote words that I felt in my heart from childhood to now
No longer criticized for fun or just to put me down

Constructive criticism I can take for it helps one to grow
Even easier to accept from people who are in the know
Fellow poets like I desired to be; all ages, races, genders, nationalities
Wanting to learn and excel to do their very best just like me

Here I was accepted where people wanted to see what I could do
My very first effort was met with such kindness when I didn’t have a clue
Her words of encouragement touched my heart so all I could do was gawk
The first person that ever responded to my work was you “Tawk”

You visited me quite often as now many others tend to do
At first I was kind of nervous I could only say thank you
Thinking how far I’ve come since those early days puts me in a daze
I often visit your Authors Page and it’s so beautiful I’m really amazed

“Tawk” your family is represented in all their picturesque glory
The love for your family is the greatest part of your wonderful story
Theirs sweet baby Jasmine a little doll, Terry, George, Josh and Daniel four handsome sons
Let us not forget the love of your life your husband Jason who brought back to you the sun

I’m sure you all can agree with me that “Tawk” Theresa is the nurturing kind
As an officer of AP she welcomes all with the gentleness of a mothers mind
Through sickness or health she never changes thinking of others before herself
Her talent alone is worth knowing who she is; her words has such richness and wealth

At AP you’re loved for the encouragement and devotion you give to all within
“Tawk” I’ll never forget way back when; and I’ll think of you always as my true friend


Author notes

"Live Your Life To The Fullest"
OPTION I: Member Tawk
She has been inspirational to me and many others.

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  • libithina
    November 11, 2008

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    A truly wonderful tribute to all the wonderful people ~ hearttouched ~

    My dear sister Theresa is a beautiful soul ~

    Just beautiful
    s to you and much
    Lib x xs


    • smonte19124 gold member
      November 11, 2008
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      Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and leaving such kindness in your words. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    This is so very wonderful!

    Theresa is deserving of this honor and more. She is such an Angel and the group is very blessed to have her. It is very special that you wrote this dedication to her. Blessings and best wishes -


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 21, 2008
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      thank you so very much for taking the time to read and for the kindness of your comments. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 21, 2008

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    This is one of the most sweetest dedications that I have read to date. Tawk is indeed a wonderful soul on this site and I am sure that she will love every word in this just as I have. It's a wonderful feeling to find someone that will be there to support you and your talent.

    This is a true blessing and I hope that your friendship carries on for a lifetime. Thanks so much for writing for this contest. I appreciate your entry and wish you the best of luck with it here! Thanks a lot for being an active member in this group!





    Jeremy0826

    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 21, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and for reading my work. Also fof having the idea for such a wonderful contest. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • tawk gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    Thank You!

    Ohhhh I am in tears as I read this you are the one who has touched my life in so many ways. Words cannnot even express how I am feeling right now thanks for caring about me so much. You mean the world too me, you are such a strong, brave and talented woman and I am so proud to call you my friend! Thanks again I am deeply touched. God bless you. love and hugs Theresa (tawk)

    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 21, 2008
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      Hi Tawk, you are very deserving of recognition. I just wrote it before someone else did. In this contest I can see several poems written in your honor. God Bless


  • BlackJoker
    October 21, 2008

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    Blessed to read

    This is a blessing to read and everything about Tawk is very true. She a great woman and so are you. May God keep on blessing not only her and you, but all of you. What a awesome poem!!!


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 21, 2008
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      Thank you so much for leaving such kind comments. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    awesome

    Hello sweet soul.
    You have penned here a beautiful dedication to Tawk.Your words are filled with so much love and devotion.She is a beautiful soul and loved by many, including me.Your words paint a very friendly story of how you came to be here and of how you found true friendship.You have been a pleasure to read my friend and I wish you all the best in the contest.
    Much love and happiness to you.
    ~Angel-Anne~


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 21, 2008
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      Thank you so much for taking the time to read and write such wonderful comments. God Bless, Jo-Ann

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