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The Longing

A beautiful woman
A window
Lightly frosted
Like a cake
Not as if for a wedding or some other
Formal declaration of any particular importance
But something to be consumed
For the sake of itself and nothing more
On a blustery autumn afternoon

And consume it she does

Cold air stalks the wet ground outside
But inside
So warm
Loneliness and melancholia may have paid a visit
But nonetheless
She is warm

What she waits for is moot
The elegance of her anticipation itself
Conveys the beauty of natural rhythm and cadence and
The longing of soft light and shadows
And downright poetry

More than a hundred romantics
Writing a thousand earnest love-notes
For a million years

Using nothing but blood and tears for ink




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  • stef-witt gold member
    October 15
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    This is really beautiful!! Wonderful ending!! Well done!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 30

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    A most beautiful write, Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    I really love your take on the prompt. Its wonderful & very creative. I really love the last 9 lines.. especially the last one.

    Good luck in the contest

    kat


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    I really have enjoyed the pleasure in sharing your words.
    A wonderful crafted piece
    Loved the last two stanzas
    Best wishes Julie