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Blessed with Life

Blessed with Life,
Blessed with a friend whom has lived and died.
Breathing in the earth's air,
When the Doctor's said she was not suppose to.
Blessed to walk on the earth's ground,
When they all said she would never.
Blessed to speak to this earth,
When so many said she be silent.
Blessed to be wise and normal,
When a lot of them spoke of a mental defect.

Blessed with life,
She lives on with God in her corner.
Blessed with Faith of a unknown power,
that shines on others.
Blessed with wisdom of many.
that will never be forgotten.
Blessed with a upbeat energy,
You can't help but laugh.
Blessed with a joyful spirit,
you can't help but smile.

Blessed with life,
I have a friend.
Blessed with her friendship,
I had a lover.
Blessed with a smile,
I can't stay mad at her ever.
Blessed with happiness,
I hope she always remember me.

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"Live Your Life To The Fullest And Have An Awesome Time!"

Option 1.

To my friend who have once had as a lover, now a friend and one day, i really good friend again.

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  • libithina
    November 11, 2008

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    Much love to you dear friend

    Lib x x x s


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    Thank you very much for your entry
    in my contest! I appreciate it and wish
    you all the best in my contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • smonte19124 gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Lovely heartfelt words that touches the heart. Great job and good luck in the contest. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    the joy and beauty of this poem really shines through!
    YOu must be a good friend to have!
    ears/Seattle

    well done!


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    What a nice, loving and healing piece to write. So full of honoring and special memories of that person. What a wondrous cycle you went through; and I think the last stanza sums that up;


    "Blessed with life,
    I have a friend.
    Blessed with her friendship,
    I had a lover.
    Blessed with a smile,
    I can't stay mad at her ever.
    Blessed with happiness,
    I hope she always remember me."

    She will. Everyone we have ever loved remains a part of us, and we of them - always. It is great that you are friends. We should never stay mad forever. This was lovely!


  • tawk gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    What a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your friend! Amazing imagery and emotion. I so enjoyed reading this morning. love and hugs Theresa


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    A beautiful tribute to your friend.Filled with love and devotion.I wish you the best in the contest.Much love and happiness to you.
    ~Angel-Anne~

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