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An Everlasting Mission

This everlasting gobstopper
created by mother nature
Promises fullfilled by the
desire to color our world
erasing our societies problems.

Author notes

Prompt: Used both Surreal and Sunset
20 words.

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  • etoile
    October 27, 2008

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    this was an interesting way of expressing both prompts, but I did like it. the last bit really hit home for me. I liked the meaning behind this poem.

    thanks for entering and goodluck