i kiss your lips
within the moonlit meadow
twilight finds us in this lunar melony
your eyes seem to sparkle
as you look into my eyes
i see deep within you
will you be my pride
the wind blows cool
on this epic night
as i hold you tight
the night is now worm tonight
body heat shared
i find eachother one
staying up threw the night
till the morning sun
whispers speaking who we are
breathless still
we kiss once more
finding secrets
both mine and yours
one the wind are dreams may flower
till tomorrow my dear i wait for no other
A contest entry
- Men Only by Amera.
2000 points, ended November 3, 2008, 12 entries
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A sweet all nighter for the one and no other. Beautifully written.
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Yes, whispers on the wind. That's the sort of thing which hangs heavy on the memories and in the air. so sensuous, so tantalizing and, at the same time, tranquilizing. The sort of thing that converges on every fibre.
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This is simply a beautiful love poem and what makes it unique and original is your gift for tactile imagery. You paint feelings more than images and that is wonderfully amazing.
Love,
Amera♥
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this was the first cometent i have had like this i thank you for it i will have to give a coment back to balance this thought thanks again and hope to chat soon
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i swear that is something about you the just reminds me of me sometimes, but only better, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, amazing poem
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