a worn thread
frayed and faded
stitched with fates' passage,
holds urgently to precious strands
tangled in tattered remnants
unraveling fibers of solace,
tapestry of mind
spun into turbulent weaves
binds solemnly to faith's fabric
praying for sanctity of calm.
Author notes
Prompt - Tapestry
A contest entry
- #7 Prompt by katzeyez.
700 points, ended November 3, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Another fine work on this Linda...good way with words. THANKS!
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Thank you Pat, much appreciated.
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i like the woven theme here, i have something too along similar lines with the loom of these times but god knows where the poem is. a good poem here, sighing and interweavng emotions.
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Gorgeous... so well written with such beauty all about one thread stitched in the making of a tapestry. Very well penned
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Excellent take on the prompt!
Awesome metaphoric content within this piece.
Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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And woven together wonderfully is this write!!
Perfect sis!
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excellent~
Threads stitching and tapestry
All woven together in a wonderful poem
Good take on the prompt
A winner in my book
Hugs
Susan~~~~
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Thank you my friend. I appreciate your always gentle comments.
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Wow This is spectacular! Love it!
Thanks so much for this entry!
Katz xx -
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Thank you so much for the Gold. I enjoyed your contest!
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