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Lovers Embrace

Take me with you when you leave this world

I am but a motal that wishes to be with my love

hold me close in deaths sweet embrace

look not upon my face.

 

I am but a mortal woman with a desire to be

immortal to you, I wish to be bride and wife

through all eternity, tried and true, the sweet

embrace of your lovers touch holds me

 

In the throes of loves eternal destiny

I come to you and am held tightly and lovingly

till the end draws near, but instead of end

it is but a beginning here.

 

For I now have that which I want,

you for all eternity in this world of forever

no one will take you from me not now or ever

come with me my adoring man, let us run over the sand.

 

Goodbye to the mortals that made up my world

for now I am his, the wife, bride and mate forever

by his side, I am happy, chisled stone and porcelain body

but now I am his willing to remain as such.

T

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"Beloved" by Emerald de Leeuw

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  • trekkergirl
    October 27, 2008

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    This is nicely written poem. Good job. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest. I think you did well with imagery and getting your thoughts across.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    This fits the image and it's title perfectly. She is getting her most wanted wish. Well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!