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Natures' Magic

Nature weaves her magic
In colours red and gold
Bright against a pale blue
sky, white clouds scuttle by.

Barren trees shadow a slate
gray sky, whipped by gale
force winds.  

Green shoots peek out
from frozen ground, to
start all over again.

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  • katzeyez
    October 21, 2008

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    Yes what a beautiful tapestry of nature you have evoked with your words.Love uit!
    Thank you and good luck.
    Katz xx


  • just mercedes gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Nice, Nemmy, the seasons passing, noted by colours. Good luckin the contest.


  • arafura gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Great imagery, poet! Good luck in the contest.