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Garden of Love


Early in the morning,
as the sun peaks across the sky,
the lady of the sweet dew,
can be seen with the naked eye.

Through the gardens gates,
into a world of petal delight,
she touches all beauty and life,
a goddess born of the night.

Beauty garnishes these simple eyes,
caretaker of the thorny rose,
who by chance at times shall see her,
as she stands in breathtaking pose.



















































































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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    This is beautifully written for the picture, and I loved it very much, you are an artist with your written words.

    Joann


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    your words brought this beautiful woman to life. this poem is filled with beauty and love. Absolutely fantastic job with both the prompt & your poem.

    good luck

    kat


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    What a beautiful poem
    Such soft images you have captured here
    Best wishes to you hun
    Julie