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Sunrise Exhilaration's

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Sun rays creep slowly

toward my terrace doors;

as my fingers trace stimulating paths

through my hair.

 

Gentle breezes dare a touch

of  silk porcelain, 

my gown caresses my body, entwined as one.

 

My mind free of anxieties

as I breathe deeply

in taking purities of the fresh morning sun,

cleansing all imperfections.

 

 

 

 

 

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Option # 1
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  • Ylova silver member
    December 10, 2008

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    Oh my! This is one beautiful piece that you have penned here. The sensuality and softness is just absolutely superb. Congratulations on the HM, although this deserved so much more. Well done once again. Keep it flowing.

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Alyzeh
    October 23, 2008

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    Wow. What a beautiful piece you have penned, the softness in every word you used made the atmosphere of this poem very calm and relaxing. I loved it.

    An excellent write! Definitely a winner


  • KayJay
    October 22, 2008

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    You know sensuality! This was a beautiful write, filled with soft, gentle words that wrap one's mind with undulations of pleasure Well done.
    Ken

  • K a t gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    I really love this piece that you've penned. the softness, the sensuality within this piece is beautiful. this poem left me feeling all relaxed and calm. Excellent take on the prompt. Fantastic job on your poem

    good luck

    kat


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    Beautiful picture and your beautiful verses breathe life into it>
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!

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