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Sunset


Old gray heron
wades knee deep
along ponds edge.
Feeding.
Fiery reflections dance
across still waters.
Bass leaps through
sunset.

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Sunset

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  • etoile
    October 27, 2008

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    nice imagery throughout this poem. and great take on the prompt. this was nicely written I liked the images with the animals.
    the second half is my favourite part.

    thanks for entering and goodluck