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Surrealistic





Despite
    continued rejection, acceptance,

                          still laugh, cry,
 
        what to lose

if you give me your hand
travelling on gold wrought.


















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Prompt: Surreal
20 words

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    October 27, 2008

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    this was nicely written. great take on the prompt and I really liked the way you wrote this, the imagery was amazing. the last two lines were my favourite.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 20, 2008

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    Creative for the prompt, really stands out. Nicely done.

    Good luck in the contest.
    Storm