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I truely Love you more

If I were your girl
And you were my guy
You'd be my whole world.
That is not a lie.

I would hold you in my arms,
and never let you go.
I would try to cheer you up
When you were feeling low.

I'd battle all your enemies
Chase away your fears
I'd always be right there.
I'd kiss away your tears.

My sun would rise and set
All within your eyes.
I'd always fight to keep you.
You would be the prize.

Poems like this
Would never-ever end.
Forever in me
You'd always have a friend.

My life would be yours
Forever or maybe more.
In sunshine and happiness,
In despair and in war.

Im not saying we'd be perfect.
We'd fight and our egos would be sore.
But I'd always come back to you and say,
"I truely love you more."

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  • Rovingone gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    What a great way to say I love you to someone. Leaves no doubt.


  • Scars-On-Her-Arms
    October 21, 2008
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    i feel the same way about this guy i know...its a great poem..i just loved it!!!


  • wolfpuppy
    October 21, 2008
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    awwww