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Betrayal roars through veins,
the tears shimmer down cheekbones,
the thing this one hoped would never happen again happened,
to be told that someone was friends with one out of pity is to be dealt a death blow,
a sharp pain burns through the heart,
as disturbed and rammstein play in the background,
smothering the noise resulting from the crying of the one in the closet,
symbolizing the futility to her efforts,
the  tree rooted outside sways,
then falls,
dead
like her hope for redemption died.

Her ostracization from society is complete,
her fate is sealed.
She is lost to the world world forever.
As one lost, she bids....
adieu

Author notes

Use of I is only appropriate when one is emotionally secure. I am not, so I will refer to myself as an object. I was betrayed this day my the person I once considered my best friend. I shall not trust for a long time.....maybe never again

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  • lianna27
    October 21, 2008

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    o..this is really good...but so sad, i hope things get better and i can definitly relate to not being able to trust.