Wispy clouds cradled
in blankets of crimson,
melting into tangerine infinity...
as flamed orb kisses the horizon~
gently saying goodnight.
Author notes
Prompt: sunset
A contest entry
- 20/20 [prompt inspired QUICKIE♥ by etoile.
525 points, ended October 27, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your comments are always appreciated, please leave one.
Comments
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melting into tangerine infinity...
I thought that was one hell of a line I loved it!
congrats on the silver Well deserved
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Wow, this is really beautiful. Your words are descriptive. I loved each line I read. Congrats on your silver trophy. -
100th Hoodwink!
So beautiful, it left a lasting image in my mind, such a serene scene you paint. Best to you fine poet
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Thank you again, much appreciated.
Storm
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This is a beautiful poem - I really love the colour imagery that you have used to create this gentle piece
... beautifully done - and very deserving of the silver!
Keep writing
Polly
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I don't know how I got picked for this, but I am grateful for it.
Storm
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100th Hoodwink
StormGoddess,
Splendid imagery in this abbreviated but regally grand poetry picture vignette. Well chosen words and imagery! Well done!
You have been selected to be a Hoodwink victim of the Poetic Bandits Group. We are celebrating our 100th Hoodwink by reaching out to members of ALLPOETRY and expressing our appreciation for this wonderful poetic community. Thank you so much for all you do here to make this a great site, your efforts are noted and appreciated.
Dennis
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Thank you so much,appreciate the comments.
Storm
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a pretty image. The topic took a slightly different turn than i was expecting. lovely work.
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Thank you again, much appreciated.
Storm
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Very nice short poem that if just overflowing with beautiful images! "In blankets of crimson" -- I really love this line, it just sounds and resounds with me!! Good work!
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Thank you so very much. Appreciate your comments.
Storm
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I loved this write. the imagery was beautiful and your take on the prompt was magnificent. this was an amazing write and it was written very well.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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A beautiful poem you have penned.So peaceful and very beautiful images woven into your write.Words so tender.I wish you all the best in the contest Storm.
Much love and happiness.
Angel-Anne
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Well done! I can really see this image you created. Its beautiful.
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Now thats a sunset
You've got me melting in your subtlety wishing I was a cloud hovering over you.
Lovely work - my best to you in the contest.
Tang
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a very serene and gentle way to describe a sunset - best of luck in the contest
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