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"Lovers' Light"

Across the lips of dreaming
he bears his kiss to me
the blinding light of sweetest taste
where Night's eyes cannot see

her eyes cut right through me
no longer can I hide
the shadows no longer comfort me
her love has made me blind

his voice reaches me through slow-motion sense
his presence drugs me with his love-spell
softening the edges of my hardened heart
that he reached out to catch when it fell

through consciousness she calls to me
unlike to mortal men
our love now surrounds us both
as if it had always been

Author notes

A duet. :]
1st and 3rd stanzas are female (me.)
2nd and 4th stanzas are male (Oden Lucine.)

Thank you for your help on this, angel. I love you with all of my heart.

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