I don't care how I receive it...I just need it now!
I need it right now, boy just looking at you is
Making me wanna say "Holy cow!"
This burning, needy sensation I'm feeling down below,
Just get down in it and let my nector flow.
I need it...from you now.
I don't think I can hold it in much longer.
Just give it to me...deep and hard,
Fast and slow...let your dick pound me into
Next week, leaving my body fragile and weak.
You know you want me...so what's stopping you?
Come on, ravish me until there's nothing left,
Come on inside and get away with this theft.
Give it to me now...I'm wet and ready for you,
Let your dick get in there until it turns blue.
Give me something good...as you give me your wood.
Tasting every inch, very salty and sweet, while you
Grab my ass like a piece of meat, before you turn me
Over and ride this backseat.
Give me something to make me scream in pure delight,
I won't even mind if you give me a little bite.
I need it...from you...you know what I mean,
Just you, me, and a bottle full of whipped cream.
Come on honey don't stop and quit,
Not until you go down and suck this juicy clit.
Come on baby go on and ring my bell
Making me holler, scream and yell.
I need it...from you...this...uhhh...you know what I mean.
Come on now give it to me now...this...ughh...something good.
I need it badly honey, I need your dick from you.
So just give it to me now, fill me up with all of your love.
Give me something really good, something to make clutch my
Muscles tight and make yourselves scream in delight,
As we then lay here exhausted under the moonlight.
A contest entry
- quickie adult---i need it ...from you by ratkos.
1900 points, ended October 21, 2008, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
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this is wonderful , a great piece, my type of writing. i look forward to reading more from you. -
its nice
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Very straight-forward and direct. Quite interesting. I think that the on again/off again rhyme really did not work here though.
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Whew wheres the fire extinguisher? this is wonderfully written with great imagery. Thank you
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WOW....WOW.. Very great, intense, and hot write luv. My mind is still spinning and my mouth open in awe. Can feel the strong need with each and every line. Great write as always
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