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Candle

Put out the candle and stoke the fire
to keep us as the flame does expire.
Night is a lovely taste of life at best,
when the weary soul may quietly rest.

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"Extinguished Essence (01)" by Melissa Byrd

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    This has a spell-like, almost prayer like feel. This is a good poem for the image. Thank you for entering and good luck!