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The Pieces of Rhonda

You lived your life out of

control,

Sometimes your up and on a

roll.

When people do you wrong you come back

to earth,

You want to cry but what is it

worth.

I feel your pain because you have been a

friend,

But wake up and smell the

pain.

You keep going back to what has your

life down,

The one's you call friends are laughing

as clowns.

If you would only leave to start your

life over,

Give up your habits to see the 4 leaf

clover.

You are sweet but easily

confused,

People in and out of your body will

abuse.

Maybe you have to hit rock bottom to see

the vision,

You can't wait on a so called friend to provide

a discision.

I'm only a friend that care's about your

wealth,

The road you are traveling is bad for your

health.

Please tell me what you think

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  • narcissist
    October 20, 2008

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    Oh i love this! I understand being in this position of knowing that a way a person is acting seems so obviously unhealthy for them... It's tough to see that sometimes it's the way they have to be, or they maybe have more patience... Or maybe they just don't understand or won't. It can get frustrating, and sometimes trying to show them can push them away. Anyway, amazing write... I loved the descriptions you used and your rhyming, as well. Well done. Thanks for sharing : )